Obscure Motives

Posted on November 7, 2009 by Cheila
Posted in Desire/Love/Sex, Poems

In the dimness of darkness I stay wavering; observing others deliver you exaltation, flattery and offer you their servility.
While I pondering on how I can become more fearless and less timid, I decide to remain with my existence hidden.

Your words create a melody to my ears. Dancing as I recite every clause, every point, your grammatical construction,the depths of your mind's wonders. It's like food, fuel to my cerebrum; which craves with ravenous aggression.Those words palpitate through my soul, enlivening and bolting thoughts are on the go. Your beautiful filled pages are promises of my reflections. I just can't help it, your writing is so captivating that I find myself coherently contemplating about what will you compose next. Maybe one day I'll have the courage to let you know how our minds connect.

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  • noreply@blogger.com (Tonja +Jere + Kids)

    good post, lots of emotions. thanks for sharing.

  • noreply@blogger.com (Aeish)

    Sweet! :)

  • noreply@blogger.com (Restless Mind)

    I know who it's for. ;)

  • noreply@blogger.com (RdGarnet)

    Ha! Restless, do you? ;)

  • noreply@blogger.com (Elisa)

    Ooh, is this for a new blog you've picked up or an old favorite?!

    I love how stimulated I can get online reading people's blogs. And sometimes I feel like I'm just being a big gushing fool. I once went on for a good two hours with Carlos about how much I loved his style and thoughts before I realized I sounded crazy! It's just hard when you admire more than a pretty set of eyes on someone!

  • noreply@blogger.com (RdGarnet)

    I'll never tell!! :) Well, maybe one day Elisa. If you're a gushing fool, then I am too. I just love to learn from these other blogs and what they have to say. It's mentally stimulating!

  • noreply@blogger.com (Jennie)

    I wish I knew who you were talking about too! Love the post, the descriptive style is awesome. I can't get over how supportive you are. I think it's amazing. It's one of the qualities I admire most about you. Keep up the good work girl, you're doing some great things.

  • noreply@blogger.com (RdGarnet)

    Thanks Jennie! I am so grateful that we connected. You are awesome!

    PS.Maybe Ill spill the beans sooner that I thought I would ;)

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